Short Story: POP!

Male's Point of View - Hypnosis

​"POP!" I said, breaking her musing thoughts.
 
"Oh... Sorry..." she said, trying to remember what she was saying.
 
"That's fine... Take your time..." I said with a smile.
 
"Right..." she said as she noticed what she was wearing. "I... I don't see why I should dress like this. I mean I feel like it's degrading..."
 
"POP!" I said, watching her lose focus for a delicious split second.

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"Sorry... Huh... I was saying... I was saying that I don't understand why I dress like…"
 
"POP!"
 
"This…" she managed to finish. "Sorry... I... I wanted to tell you something I think... What was I saying?"
 
"That you wanted to know if I minded that you dressed like this when you enter my home. The answer is no! I don't mind at all." I said with a warm smile.
 
"I do?" she asked as she looked down at her lingerie, frowning exquisitely. "I don't think..."
 
"POP!" I said.
 
"I..." she trailed off. "I'm sorry... I feel silly... I do kind of like to dress sexy... And you say you don't mind right?"
 
"Not at all." I confirmed.
 
"Oh good..." she said smiling at me. "Hhhmmm… Feels nice to be free to wear this in your home."
 
"I'm glad I can offer you something so simple!" I said with a wink.
 
She blushed and let her eyes wander away from mine. 
 
"Oh god!" she exclaimed as her gaze took in my crotch. "I'm sorry... I huh... I feel embarrassed now..."
 
"Why?" I asked.
 
"I... God... I can see your tent!" she said, blushing all over again.
 
"Right..." I said as I looked at myself. "Well... It's kind of normal right? Since you wear such sexy lingerie around me, I can't help feeling aroused."
 
"Oh god... But.. huh... We don't... I mean... This is sooo awkwa…"
 
"POP!" I said, cutting into her thought process like a knife in hot butter.
 
"Ward..." she trailed off. " I mean... I didn't mean too c..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Cause..." she trailed off. "Of course I understand that my attire can excite you... But we aren't that type of frien…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Friends..." she trailed off. "Listen, I know you find me attractive but I..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Think..." she trailed off, before her lips cracked a shy smile. "I think it's kind of flattering you find me so sexy. You aren't so bad looking yourself!"
 
"Why thank you!" I said with a smile. "Why don't you stand up and pose for me."
 
"Oh really!" she said, rolling her eyes, clearly embarrassed. "I'm not going to d..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Do that..." she trailed off. "I think I could do that..."
 
I watched her get off the bed and start to pose for me. Her body was truly a thing of erotic marvel and I couldn't help but admire the way she moved and swayed.
 
"So?" she asked between poses. "Like what you see?"
 
"You know I do..." I said as I started to stroke my cock through my pants.
 
"Huh… Listen..." She said as she noticed. "I don't mind posing for you and I understand you are hard and all... But please don't d..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Do that..." she trailed off. "I... I mean it's not proper to..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Do that..." she trailed off. "I... I was going to say that it's awkwa…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Ward..." she trailed off. "It's... It's kind of hot that you can't help yourself."
 
"I know right?" I said with a smile. "So you won't mind that I take it out then..."
 
Which I did.
 
She gasped and turned away.
 
"GOD! Ok. Huh..." she said. "Stroking yourself through your pants is ok but I mean you ca..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Can't…" she trailed off. "You just can't take it out lik…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Like that..." she trailed off. "I mean you need to warn me or something..."
 
"I kind of did. Now stop shying away and dance..."
 
"You don't think this is getting out of ha..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Hand..." she trailed off. "I... I didn't know you found me this attractive..." she said as she turned and started to dance.
 
"I obviously do." I said as I admired her curves. "And you find me attractive too, right?"
 
"I..." she said looking at me and my erection. "I kind of do..."
 
"You think I'm the most sexy and commanding man in your life."
 
"Hahahha" she said, still dancing. "I wouldn't go so far as to say th..."
 
"POP!"
 
"That..." she trailed off. "I... I think you're handsome and all... But I don't find you com..."
 
"POP!"
 
"manding..." she trailed off. "I mean.. You are pretty confident... Taking out your cock like this... Yeah... I guess you are pretty commanding in your own way."
 
"I know right?" I said. "It all makes you so horny and submissive. You feel you can't resist my commanding presence. You will obey and kneel between my legs. You will obey and suck my cock."
 
"Oh gosh..." she said, rolling her eyes. "I do find you attractive and commanding, sure..." she said, still dancing. "But submit? Obey? HA! I would never obe…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Bey..." she trailed off. "I mean... I do feel kind of submissive sometimes... I even like to let my lovers take the lead... But I won't su…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Suck..." she trailed off. "I... I do feel like you have some hold over me... I mean... I'm dancing for you while you masturbate..."
 
"I know you do. That's why you'll obey and suck my cock."
 
"I... I won't deny that it would be very hot..." she said without making a move to come near me. "But... I feel like I have to draw a lin..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Line..." she trailed off. "I mean... We haven't done anything like this before... Are you sure you want to do this?"
 
"How could I be more clear?" I asked as I pointed at my erect cock.
 
"Hahahah!" she laughed and twirled. "I guess you are right..."
 
She danced a little closer and looked at my cock.
 
"You should know that I don't normally suck cock.. So... This will be a one time thi…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Thing..." she trailed off. "I mean... If you want to do this again... I'm not sure I'm going to be the best cocksuc…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Sucker..." she trailed off. "I can do my best for you..."
 
"I know you will..." I said as I watched her kneel. "I know you'll discover that you love to obey me and suck my cock."
 
"I wouldn't go so far as to say th..."
 
"POP!"
 
"That..." she trailed off. "I mean... I can't be sure... All the other cocks I sucked didn't do it fo…"
 
"POP!"
 
"For me..." she trailed off. "I mean... I won't know until I try, right?"
 
"That's the spirit!" I said as I let go of my cock.
 
She took it in her hands and looked at it.
 
"Say you love to obey." I commanded.
 
"What?" she said as she looked up from my cock. "I'll do this for you bu..."
 
"POP!"
 
"But..." she trailed off. "I mean... I feel strange sayin..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Ying..." she trailed off. "Ok... I love obeying you. There… Happy?"
 
"I am." I said as she took her first lick.
 
"Now say it again and believe it."
 
"You're impossible..." she said as she kissed my cock head. "Once is enou…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Enough..." she trailed off. "I... I can do that..."
 
She sucked my cock head again before continuing.
 
"I love to obey..." she said, clearly feeling it a little more.
 
"Again."
 
"I..." suck. "Love to obey..."
 
"Again."
 
Suck. "I love..." Suck. "To obey..."
 
"I own you." I said as she sucked.
 
Suck. "What? No..." Suck. "You don't o..."
 
"POP!"
 
"own..." she trailed off. Suck. "You can'..."
 
"POP!"
 
"Can't..." she trailed off. Suck. "I mean... I can't be owne…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Owned..." she trailed off. Suck. "I..." Suck. "I feel like you do..."
 
"Say it and believe it."
 
Suck. "Oh come on..." Suck. "Just relax and enj…"
 
"POP!"
 
"Enjoy..." she trailed off. Suck. "Ok... You own me."
 
"Very good... I think we are entering a new state in our friendship. Wouldn't you agree?"
 
Suck. "I completely agree." Suck.
 
​I watched her suck with more and more enthusiasm as the realizations piled up in her head. The hypnotic trigger acted like a pin popping a bubble. Only the bubbles were lines of thought. Once the bubble 'popped', she found herself forgetting all about her reservations concerning what she was saying. Once the mind can't react like it wants to, it looks for other ways to react.
 
​So I just had to pop her unwanted reactions until her mind boiled down to the best ones.

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